All Paths Point Within


July 1, 2013 by Angel Pricer


photo courtesy of Alastair’s Photo Fiction

Flash Photo Fiction was not part of my plan for today’s blog post, but after I surpassed my 1,000 word goal on the first day of Camp NaNoWriMo, I took a break to read some of the blogs I follow and this short piece just came pouring out.  Thank you Alastair and Skye, for a fun segue into the rest of my day!

Alastair’s Photo Fiction and Blog

“All paths point within,”
she says, sporting a childlike grin.
“But you don’t understand,”
he frets, “it’s all about the win.”
“There’s so much more to the game you play,”
and brushing back his hair,
she looks into his eyes,
then time and she are no longer there.

© Angel Pricer, 2013, All Rights Reserved

10 thoughts on “All Paths Point Within

  1. YAY YOU!!! I loved it!! xxxx 😀

  2. Alastair says:

    Brilliant. I like it 🙂

    There IS so much more than just winning. There’s the taking apart … sorry .. taking part 😉

  3. misskzebra says:

    Great! I liked the rhythm and playfulness of the piece.

    (P.S.) I like your blog layout.

    • Angel Pricer says:

      Your feedback means a lot to me! Thank you so much :). I don’t write a lot of poetry and when I do I rarely share it, so hearing that you picked up on the rhythm and playful aspect really makes me smile!

  4. Lu Hocker says:

    Very nice images came to life as I read this! I finally got an opportunity to catch up on your posts and my unbiased opinion overall is: Awesome job, I enjoyed each one, so happy that you are determined to write well! YOU GO GIRL!!! ⊙ 🙂 ♡

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